l think you should give a more fun font for "california" since the object sounds very bright and happy and what not... Also, maybe you could turn the "o" into a sun! :D The sunglasses are a cool addition, but I would make them larger and easier to see and to fill up more room :)
You should make the 'o' in California like a sun! That'd be sick! I like the blue, it goes well with the yellow. I would also add more to the design itself, filling in spaces and maybe using another color? Maybe add a little beach scene in the background of the package? can't wait to see the final product!
add a little more it seems empty
ReplyDeletel think you should give a more fun font for "california" since the object sounds very bright and happy and what not...
ReplyDeleteAlso, maybe you could turn the "o" into a sun! :D
The sunglasses are a cool addition, but I would make them larger and easier to see and to fill up more room :)
You should make the 'o' in California like a sun! That'd be sick! I like the blue, it goes well with the yellow. I would also add more to the design itself, filling in spaces and maybe using another color? Maybe add a little beach scene in the background of the package? can't wait to see the final product!
ReplyDeleteyes, i agree with Tripp, it seems really empty... i like the california sun, but im not really attracted to it, make it so that it pops out more
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