The yellow font is a good idea, but the thin-ness of the font + the white background makes it still very difficult to read farther than up close, maybe changing the white background to black or a similar color.
to tell you the truth, I couldn't even see the text. Try using something more bold and big. I would also add some color behind the coffee beans if possible but this is a great start man
agreed, wish that you changed the background color to something darker, or something that will make the yellow stand out! same here, like the beans... keep working on it! :)
make the words thicker :) I like the beans in the back though...although there are a lot of them XD either add more to fill it up or take away some in some areas to make it look like a "natural" pile of beans.
The yellow font is a good idea, but the thin-ness of the font + the white background makes it still very difficult to read farther than up close, maybe changing the white background to black or a similar color.
ReplyDeletecant even read it, bold the font and make it bigger
ReplyDeletethe coffee beans are good though
ReplyDeleteto tell you the truth, I couldn't even see the text. Try using something more bold and big. I would also add some color behind the coffee beans if possible but this is a great start man
ReplyDeleteagreed, wish that you changed the background color to something darker, or something that will make the yellow stand out! same here, like the beans... keep working on it! :)
ReplyDeletemake the words thicker :)
ReplyDeleteI like the beans in the back though...although there are a lot of them XD
either add more to fill it up or take away some in some areas to make it look like a "natural" pile of beans.