doughboy fresh indeed. except, i would change the the 2nd person from the right. the cropping job seems a bit too photoshopy. try using the pen tool to select the hair and make it so that it doesn't look like you applied a stroke to the head. other than that, this is really nice. the blurriness of the photo is on point too. nice job
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You should take out the feet in the background. It's hard to tell that they're feet. It just confuses peeps amd takes away from the image.
ReplyDeleteotherwise, this project is DOUGHBOY FRESH.
doughboy fresh indeed. except, i would change the the 2nd person from the right. the cropping job seems a bit too photoshopy. try using the pen tool to select the hair and make it so that it doesn't look like you applied a stroke to the head. other than that, this is really nice. the blurriness of the photo is on point too. nice job
ReplyDeleteyou're so sophisticated.
ReplyDeleteYa, I know. this was just my pre-project one, so all the errors will be gone in the final
ReplyDeletemaybe try to get everyone in focus and make it so that the arm doesn't block you in the background
ReplyDeletethe wall behind the 2nd person to the left is so bright, but he isnt. he kind of pops out
ReplyDeletekinda out of focus, but i love the effect that it gives!
ReplyDeletethis is so good!
ReplyDeleteI like how its out of focus, can't wait to see what else you add!
ReplyDeleteIt;s good how it is out of focus, but after a while it gives me a headache. Maybe put it a little more in focus.
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